Final Essay:

In my final draft of my Historiography, I used the tips from the peer review to improve my paper. I added more details to each paragraph even more, defining each time period well along with reviewing the community and land use aspects of each time. I also had to complete the Speculative Fiction section, where I planned out how the future of my site would look like.

Completing this Historiography developed my paraphrasing skills. When talking about each time period, I had to paraphrase the evidence I used in order to give the right details without plagiarizing.